972: Untitled... Poem by Amit Biswas

972: Untitled...

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I woke up to a beautiful morn,
Drenched in the overnight rain,
Every leaf dripping wet,
As you used to in my love,

With or without you,
I want to live, in spite of you,
Am sad no more,
I am out of my amour.

(June 4,2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catastrophe King 13 March 2007

One can hear the beats of your heart in this one.... you drench the reader with each of your words.... God Bless those souls who hurt this way!

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K Fernandes 06 June 2006

i read this one when you wrote it but could not bear to comment. these lines make me cry.. 'I woke up to a beautiful morn, Drenched in the overnight rain, Every leaf dripping wet, As you used to in my love....' thats poetry from the heart.. true and pure but you know what? I wish.. and pray you become ordinary once again.. no.. i dont want you to be a poet.. not like this amit.. not at this great cost...

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Geoff Warden 04 June 2006

Interesting piece....well scripted......

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Amit Biswas

West Bengal, India
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