Earlier when I had taken ill,
You cared, and I knew you will,
You came to see me with your stetho,
Cared much more than you treated,
The care and love it had gotten,
I wished ill I remained,
Ill am again,
To see me, you didn’t remain,
Even the info you got was just casual,
Asked How are u, to be cordial,
Could not reply in pain,
Wish my heart stopped forever,
Not to be ill again.
(June 1,2006)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You have a heart so pure.... God Bless! It's so good that you care... but, it is wrong to be wishing to be breathless! Cheers man.... you have some lovely lexis hidden inside you... just go ahead and compose!