A 4-Ring Circus: Bri's Married Life Poem by Bri Edwards

A 4-Ring Circus: Bri's Married Life

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In my youth there were circuses that had rings (three):
in BIG tents, or buildings, they entertained kids like me,
using three circular areas in which could be found:
gymnasts, lions, acrobats, a dancing bear, & a clown.


My adult life has been a ‘circus' with rings (four) ,
a 'marriage-circus' with gold finger rings that I wore
to say to all: "I've chosen to partner with this, my wife."
Alas, my first three rings have been removed —due to strife.


But my LAST ring stays on —unless I'm taking a shower.
It's NOT that there's no strife; there IS. But there is a power
which keeps us together through the marital ‘Thick & Thin'.
And I feel, with each passing year, this will be for us a WIN!



(August....2019)

Thursday, September 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: divorce,marriage,symbolism
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i wrote this for a recent /eBook poetry anthology (....which i helped, just a bit, to edit.....) , published by Fabrizio Frosini:
Gold Star - 168,605 Points Fabrizio Frosini (1953 / Tuscany, Italy) .

He's a medical doctor who also apparently is a big poetry fan. this poem was first published in the anthology this autumn (...or is it still summer? ? in the northern hemisphere? ....) .

bri

:)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
doug scotney 12 September 2019

married 2x2 times, Bri?

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 September 2019

A wonderful work... I am happy to learn that you are an able ring master! I forgot to inform you that my son has been placed...now I am absolutely free but I have not yet found my missing towel...ha..ha...ha

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Bri Edwards 12 September 2019

Fabrizio's list of published works, including eBook anthologies are listed on his PH site. :) Savita Tyagi has also been involved in some anthologies, as have some other PH members. :) bri

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