(a) 46 (Love/Passion) The Garden Of Paradise Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 46 (Love/Passion) The Garden Of Paradise

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Your eyes....hypnotize.
Let me swim in them
Waters swell and rise
An ocean filled to the brim

You say, I mesmerize
You have touched my soul
Putting an end to its cries
My heart, Is that what you stole?

Listening to your heartbeat
The sound of my universe
This feels so complete
In this magic I get immersed

O wind, continue to blow
This sweet gentle breeze
Touching us, making us glow
Carrying us to the high seas

Connecting our body, spirit, soul and mind
Maybe destiny wanted to make us wait
Now hold our hands, keep them intertwined
Take us to the garden of paradise, open its gates

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Darbyshire 14 December 2006

Great write darlig, good one dave

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