(a) 18 (Love/Passion) Untie The Knot Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 18 (Love/Passion) Untie The Knot

Rating: 3.2

Untie the knot for me
of your deep inner secrets....
Give me the key
of your inner fantasies
where u have been drowning....
Let me swim in the sea
of your dreams, desires and longings....
Let me unravel the mysteries
of your mind
thats made you blind
thats been raging in you
tormenting you
spending you
lusting in you
bursting in you.
touch me
and feel the peace
walk into your soul....
The storm will cease.
Feel the calm
like a balm.
Stop searching
and yearning.
Feel my aura...
Embrace it
If you hug me close
you can share it....


Oh Wow Tranquil...now this is a really excellent poem! With Great imagery and A WOnderful title that just grabbed me and made me want to see what your poem was all about...I am so happy I came by to say hello. ((Smile)) Another great poem with a beautiiful message.... Thank U so much for sharing Tranquil..........Ten! =Shelley=

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Geoff Warden 22 May 2007

Untie the Knot...... Ok I was expecting something totally different....yet was left not disapointed you carried the passanate flow to the very end and beyond.. very well done...

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Preeti - is here! 03 February 2007

Untie the knot! what a great title...it's live...let me in....lovely poem! Preets

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Original Unknown Girl 07 December 2006

Wow..... I love this TO, the whole theme, the way you depict the scene, the imagery is spectacular! What a beautiful poem.... HG: -) xx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 07 December 2006

HOLY SMOKES, T.O....You are inded the impressive Sensualistic Poet...... Heart capturing decorum of diction abounds this piece & your work in general since your most welcome return....Pictorials reign strongly over this commanding poem...Rhythm very much in sync with the mellifluous structure you have constructed.A superb penning... FRANK

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