Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean


(a) 18 (Love/Passion) Untie The Knot - Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

Untie the knot for me
of your deep inner secrets....
Give me the key
of your inner fantasies
where u have been drowning....
Let me swim in the sea
of your dreams, desires and longings....
Let me unravel the mysteries
of your mind
thats made you blind
thats been raging in you
tormenting you
spending you
lusting in you
bursting in you.
Come...
touch me
and feel the peace
walk into your soul....
The storm will cease.
Feel the calm
like a balm.
Stop searching
and yearning.
Feel my aura...
Embrace it
If you hug me close
you can share it....


Comments about (a) 18 (Love/Passion) Untie The Knot by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

  • (9/10/2007 1:52:00 AM)

    My Response TO: ~UNTIE THE KNOT~

    Could I let you, into my flight of imaginations?
    I was sinking how, in my clandestine emotions!

    Could I let you, swim my yearning delusions?
    I was blinded how, in my raging deceptions!

    Could I let you, lust my tormented perceptions?
    I was busted how, in my spleenful intuitions!

    Could I let you, unknot my searching impressions?
    I was embraced now, just with misapprehensions!

    Now, tell me how can I let you; …………
    …………… touch me, hug me or feel my sensations?
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  • (6/22/2007 10:36:00 AM)

    Oh Wow Tranquil...now this is a really excellent poem! With Great imagery and A WOnderful title that just grabbed me and made me want to see what your poem was all about...I am so happy I came by to say hello.
    ((Smile)) Another great poem with a beautiiful message....
    Thank U so much for sharing Tranquil..........Ten!
    =Shelley=
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  • (5/22/2007 6:35:00 PM)

    Untie the Knot......
    Ok I was expecting something totally different....yet was left not disapointed
    you carried the passanate flow to the very end and beyond..
    very well done...
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  • (2/3/2007 9:11:00 AM)

    Untie the knot!
    what a great title...it's live...let me in....lovely poem!

    Preets
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  • (12/7/2006 3:28:00 AM)

    Wow..... I love this TO, the whole theme, the way you depict the scene, the imagery is spectacular! What a beautiful poem.... HG: -) xx (Report)Reply

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (12/7/2006 2:50:00 AM)

    HOLY SMOKES, T.O....You are inded the impressive Sensualistic Poet......
    Heart capturing decorum of diction abounds this piece & your work in general since your most welcome return....Pictorials reign strongly over this commanding poem...Rhythm very much in sync with the mellifluous structure you have constructed.A superb penning...
    FRANK
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 7, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 4, 2010


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