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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, June 13, 2010

A Barren Way

Rating: 4.3
You did lot of survey
Found nothing to your dismay
It was brazen and barren way
How you could enjoy and have any say?

Flowers have their own way to grow
Open up in time with color to show
Fill in the air with fragrance and flow
I am determined not to spoil them and have taken vow

It is nature’s law to allow timely season
Spring may not come early without any reason
It may also vary from person to person
It is only love that comes from father to son

We may go in for beautiful scene
We may come across many things which are never seen
We may wish to develop strong bond and are very keen
This is correct approach and it has always been

Do nothing which spoils the core
Take the lead for ships to anchor
It is wise steps to search for means
Trust the people and find the friends

Go all out and explore then avenues
It may add to income and revenues
The fortune may try to smile
If you seize it and go for while

Let others may block your way and stall your move
They may unseat you and try to remove
Your Endeavour must be to stay on and fight
It must find its way in this context to go right

There may develop little snag or hitch
You may not be able to carve out way or reach
Still it may not remain as forgone conclusion
It has to find its way for its inclusion

Let river find hr carved path to flow freely
Meet the bank and pass of merrily
The trees may bend with joy and acknowledge
What a happy union without developing any wedge?


Life has to move on without developing any relation cracks
We must trust and offer support and if necessary to back
This may prove to be a healthy move with some noble aim
You may then be in position to advocate and claim

If we go after it and burn from within
The chance for success may recede and look very thin
It has to have its fair try and must meet with success
It may then be called very good beginning with shining phase

Life my turn hostile and prove very hard
It is our duty to attempt for good and look forward
No one can come to your rescue if you lack support
You may always fail in attempts and fell short
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
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COMMENTS
Darshna Chopra 04 August 2010
t was brazen and barren way How you could enjoy and have any say? ....... it like a wild dream......10
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 August 2010
===== ‘Do nothing which spoils the core’ ~Universal Clock ~ ~Universal Symphony ~ ~Universal Harmony ~ ~Universal Synchrony ~ ~ Universal Unalloying … Let us find/discover/in-tune/enjoy all these with ‘feel good’ feel-no-bad’ and full contentment will deluge us…excellent composition Sir and is as always… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 =========
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Chand Shikari 11 July 2010
It was brazen and barren way How you could enjoy and have any say? ...barren n isolatedway...10
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Chand Shikari 06 July 2010
ou did lot of survey Found nothing to your dismay It was brazen and barren way How you could enjoy and have any sa, , , really it is barren way and can be found nothing....10
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Maria Shipka 25 June 2010
This barren way was barren also for me, . by reading and trying to understand all poet inside you wanted to describe.... there was some whiles I caught the right tone but presently I again lost myself and stopped. Of course it is not your fault I so hardly combated, It' s me who have to more try to grow up if ever when I will be able reaching up your level :)
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Samantha Samis 17 June 2010
This poem is very motivational! Very straight-forward, and positive; I love your focus on struggle and moving forward no matter what.
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Pranab K Chakraborty 15 June 2010
So long you write with rhythm! Perhaps many of your writing is such. Run poet, run long. You have good wishes to make the earth a place as heaven. Your fight is why so tough. But you have to move forward as long as you can. In this writing also reflects your philosophy. Well, write more, live long....... Regards, Apoet
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Pranab K Chakraborty 15 June 2010
So long you write with rhythm! Perhaps many of your writing is such. Run poet, run long. You have good wishes to make the earth a place as heaven. Your fight is why so tough. But you have to move forward as long as you can. In this writing also reflects your philosophy. Well, write more, live long....... Regards, Apoet
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Pranab K Chakraborty 15 June 2010
So long you write with rhythm! Perhaps many of your writing is such. Run poet, run long. You have good wishes to make the earth a place as heaven. Your fight is why so tough. But you have to move forward as long as you can. In this writing also reflects your philosophy. Well, write more, live long....... Regards, Apoet
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Pranab K Chakraborty 15 June 2010
So long you write with rhythm! Perhaps many of your writing is such. Run poet, run long. You have good wishes to make the earth a place as heaven. Your fight is why so tough. But you have to move forward as long as you can. In this writing also reflects your philosophy. Well, write more, live long....... Regards, Apoet
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