Rose is a beautiful flower,
Having a lot of fragrance
Growing among the deadly thorns,
It has never lost its beauty.
Being under the care of sun,
Getting the power from the sun,
It never fades but glows brightly.
Becoming itself a good present to the sweet-heart.
Keeping the negative energy away,
Bringing a positive attitude towards us,
What else do we need from it?
It just offers a good love to us.
Offering rose at the feet of God,
Rose itself feels proud of performing,
Its duty for the sake of Lord,
Taking the last breath from this world
Gives it a nice farewell.
10-02-2008
Yes, I enjoy every bit of the scent of rose and the beauty of it as much as this wonderful piece of your poem!
Nive doing! Roses, so beautiuful... growing among the deadly thorns... Yes, Life is conceived everywhere, anyplace.
For an ordinary expression of mind a rose is only a rose and when it sees by the poetic mind good varied expressions and it is beautiful.
A rose is so beautiful and you have shared that in you poem. Well done my friend.
Roses are beautiful and come in many colors. If one pays attention to symbolic colors, one might be choosey. In one of her poems, Marianne Moore expressed her distate for yellow roses because yellow betokens infidelity and ill; whereas, a white rose means well.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
''Offering rose at the feet of God, Rose itself feels proud of performing, Its duty for the sake of Lord, Taking the last breath from this world Gives it a nice farewell.'' a very nice poem, a noble feeling.10++