A Better Day Poem by Twilight Whispers

A Better Day

Rating: 4.2

The fire in the sky is burning
The child in my heart is yearning
As I learn the truth about you
The wind is blowing through my soul
My faith is growing blue and cold
As I drift away from you

I always dreamed that you would stay
I never thought you’d walk away
I thought I’d live to see forever through
Still I sit here and think of you
How do you look and what do you do?
Will I see you at the end of a better day?

After all the pain and tears I’ve cried
All the hurt left locked inside
Did you really mean to let go of my hand
I’m standing here in the pouring rain
Sheltering from this sweet refrain
I really thought you’d understand


red rose of texas 09 December 2009

very impressive i really like your poem ^.^

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Rachel Ellard 03 November 2009

I can really relate to the feelings you have expressed here. This is very good.

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Lauren Owens 05 July 2009

Il ove it, such an insight

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Indira Renganathan 30 May 2009

A touching call for a better day

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Saadat Tahir 24 May 2009

very nice lines so tender an touchy its a tenner i did a similar poem...why dont you then heed? do it when time permits cheers

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