A Call Of Lovers Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

A Call Of Lovers

Rating: 4.6


I still feel
where you touched me
beloved of heart and soul
I am not a love lost
beyond regaining
call to me
and I will come to you
without delay
without fail
I will come
heart open
this I swear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Gripping, beautiful

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Wali Jamali 29 February 2008

After reading your this poem, few lines from grat sufi poet hazrat shah abdul latif bhitai immediately came to my mind. where great sufi has drawn some beautiful poetic imageries. he says: Thristy seeks not water, Water seeks thristy. and at an-other place, he says, March in the hot and cold (weather) , There is no time to sit down. Lest, there should be a darkness. And you don't find the Foot-prints of your beloved.

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Theresa Rayman 14 March 2006

Eila: I can really feel the angst and passion in this piece. You have a wonderful way with words. I look forward to reading more of your work. Blessings-TGR

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A. Michael Sears 08 March 2006

I very much enjoy this piece. Very simple and heart opening. Well done. ams

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Peter Lebuhn 10 February 2006

Eila I love your writing very soulful You live in N.Y. not far from Peter I am in Philadelphia Keep in touch with me you beautiful goddess Peter LeBuhn plebuhn@hotmail.com

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