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A Beautiful Dream

Rating: 5.0

you appear there
in front of me
very nearly transparent
your presence looking like a reflection
in a mist shrouded mirror
so hazy a strong puff
might blow you away like fog
yet this Love is not the memory
of a beautiful dream...
when I reach out
you are there

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Sekharan Pookkat 10 June 2013

Beautiful dreams are the reflections of positive minds

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Soumita Sarkar 10 June 2013

Liked this verse.........If u can do read my poems and comment them.Thank you

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Alfredo Jacques 05 December 2006

I just wanted to say great poem.

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Peter Lebuhn 10 February 2006

I love this write Eila Very similiar in idealogy to one of mine I think you will like 'The ones that got away the one that stayed' Check it out Peter

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Ernestine Northover 10 January 2006

This is a moving poem Eila, and speaks volumes in such a short write. A nice story and well put together. Thank you for postingit. Love Ernestine XXX

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