Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Rookie (11/26/1971 / New York)

A Beautiful Dream

Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

you appear there
in front of me
very nearly transparent
your presence looking like a reflection
in a mist shrouded mirror
so hazy a strong puff
might blow you away like fog
yet this Love is not the memory
of a beautiful dream...
when I reach out
you are there


Comments about A Beautiful Dream by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

  • Sekharan PookkatSekharan Pookkat (6/10/2013 12:43:00 PM)

    Beautiful dreams are the reflections of positive minds(Report)Reply

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  • Soumita SarkarSoumita Sarkar (6/10/2013 12:31:00 AM)

    Liked this verse.........If u can do read my poems and comment them.Thank you(Report)Reply

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  • Alfredo Jacques (12/5/2006 9:09:00 AM)

    I just wanted to say great poem.(Report)Reply

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  • Peter LebuhnPeter Lebuhn (2/10/2006 7:14:00 PM)

    I love this write Eila
    Very similiar in idealogy to one of mine I think you will like
    'The ones that got away the one that stayed'
    Check it out

    Peter(Report)Reply

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  • Ernestine NorthoverErnestine Northover (1/10/2006 3:29:00 PM)

    This is a moving poem Eila, and speaks volumes in such a short write. A nice story and well put together. Thank you for postingit. Love Ernestine XXX(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 4, 2005