Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Rookie (11/26/1971 / New York)

Orgasm

Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

There is no sweeter sound,
than my breath,
held hostage,
captured amidst,
a need unfolding.

Eyes gone to lust,
soft lids flutter,
as passion's kaleidoscope,
colors my darkness.

Slender neck flinches,
lips part so lightly,
warm breath spreading,
telegraphing secrets,
of soft stolen kisses.

Soft breast's swell,
arching back moves cat like,
globes framing,
bursting buds of rose.

Arms stretch upward,
pushed high overhead,
fingers curl around nothing,
looking for leverage,
to push back at desire.

Pace comes now quickly,
silken thighs spread,
coaxing lips and tongue to linger,
succulent velvet folds,
hug my perfect pearl,
then render pure nectar.

Urgent cries of passion,
requesting completion,
hips swivel and quiver,
running unleashed

racing toward perfection,
straining for oneness,
overcome by ecstasy,
with satisfaction's arrival.

Wrapped in exhaustion,
there is no sweeter sound,
than my breath,
held hostage,
released by your giving.


Comments about Orgasm by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

  • Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (11/10/2015 9:33:00 AM)

    Sensuality and sexuality combined in the poem a beautiful creativity.(Report)Reply

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  • Souren MondalSouren Mondal (11/10/2015 2:11:00 AM)

    A very sensual and brilliant poem... Incredible expression of the female desire.. Beautiful...(Report)Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/10/2015 1:53:00 AM)

    Sensual poem yet again..........(Report)Reply

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  • Destinie Thacker (6/7/2006 10:29:00 PM)

    I am at a loss for words on that one. But one does come to mind, Awsome!(Report)Reply

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  • Simon Whild (11/15/2005 9:24:00 PM)

    Yet another vivid experience that leaves me hot under the collar, not to mention other places. A feast of images that just keeps soaring.(Report)Reply

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  • Richard Stilwell (11/8/2005 1:10:00 PM)

    Beautiful.... So vivid I watched you in my mind. So powerful I felt you in my heart...(Report)Reply

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  • Uriah Hamilton (11/4/2005 1:25:00 PM)

    Thanks for that! ! ! ! !(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 4, 2005