A Request Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

A Request

Rating: 4.9


I'd like to be lost
in that tangle of
blankets
and pillows
and sheets
when you wake.

our arms
our legs
our bodies entwined
so we won't know
where you end
and I begin.

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Peter Lebuhn 30 March 2006

I long for the day Elia Peter Namaste

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***** ********* 09 January 2006

There is no better place to wake up than wrapped in your lovers arms and legs! Great imagery for such a little scorcher of a poem Eila. 10 from smiling deeply, Tai

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