A Celestial Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Celestial Love

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The childhood love between the SUN and the MOON
Turned out in such an enmity
When one appears the other disappears
And supporters follow their masters
Only unsettled souls and fidgety are common friends

Monday, October 26, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 26 October 2020

A fantastic poem with great imagination.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 29 October 2020

Innovative thinking. Liked the way you wrote very crafty work.

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Zuzu Mutairi 29 October 2020

This is the height of imagination, I really salute your thinking power.

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Darren Jkoeryo 29 October 2020

Terse and telling. Inspiring poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2020

Love between sun and moon motivates us with greater hope. This poem is very interesting. An amazing poem is shared.

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Anjandev Roy 27 October 2020

Brilliant piece.........thank u, dear friend........anjandev roy.

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