A Change Poem by Rini Shibu
A Change
The view from windows are different
and everything is changing around us
But we are same in the old state
though our view points change
When you want to change
for the sake of your loved ones
your conscience don't allow
and also you don't feel free to indulge
Then you are in state of discomfort
and climate within you alters
To compromise you close your eyes
and permit others to be free
And you breathe the air of their freedom
But are you satisfied and happy?
To be free we must always be ourselves. This poem makes us think.+++10
you breathe the air of their freedom But are you satisfied and happy? watching others change might bring some change to a person yet this will never be enough to change the person.Great insightful poem
But we are same in the old state! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Rini, the opening line makes me think, The view from a window is no more the whole of the real than is what the lens of a camera sees. We need to keep this in mind, yes? Wishing you all the best, GK
Thanks Glen, I think I shall write one more keeping this in mind.. Friend Rini
Wow! It's a brilliant poem quite insightful! Thanks for sharing.....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Human behaviour is a complex phenomenon. Yes, we change but when it is kind of forced change 'for the sake of your loved ones' it amounts to compromise. This is the time when 'you are in state of discomfort'. Thanks for sharing an analytical poem.