A Child In Red Dirt Poem by Marilyn Lott

A Child In Red Dirt

Rating: 4.5


He was just a little kid
In a kid’s kind of world
Examining the places
Where the red dirt swirled

Hills and little trenches
To climb and investigate
Thoughts and visions
For a child to create

There’s no better place
For a youngster to enjoy
Than in the red dirt country
They don’t even need a toy

Just old-fashioned imagination
That all little children possess
Tucked into their little heads
Many things they can access

There’s nothing like watching
A child in a world of red dirt
Let’s imagine we’re a kid again
You know, it wouldn’t hurt!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 02 November 2009

ankles red, so were the palms Mom's anger, after red dirt realms lets be that child again to play in the dirt and rain to forget everything else including us and enjoy the journey on childhood bus...

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Sandra Fowler 15 August 2009

Perfectly enchanting. I grew up in Appalachia where imagination was more highly prized than toys.10, for your creative child. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Vinod Kumar 09 April 2009

the child is the sun in the early morning red mountain, sweet dirt, all the begining is in it, thanks for sharing 10++

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Mamta Agarwal 07 February 2009

sense of adventureunmindful of the mess- a child's world beautifully recreated by you.10 Mamta

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Ron Flowers 29 November 2008

Marilyn, this one could have been written about me. I have enjoyed everything I have read by you. I have just been reminded that I must read some more. Warm regards Ron

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Melvina Germain 14 August 2015

Excellent Marilyn, I think it's time for a children's Kindle book perhaps, I would love to see that.....

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Rajnish Manga 20 October 2012

Simple & innocent is the world of a small child where a bit of red dirt is enough to make him happy. Grown ups cannot compete. Lovely poem.

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Sylva Portoian 18 May 2012

Sorry I liked to crawn you rhymes To say climb and chase... Will be softer... I think With out hurting your soulful phrase...!

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Sylva Portoian 18 May 2012

I love babies... And this one Adorable... you can sing and dance With the words...

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Sylva Portoian 18 May 2012

I love babies... And this one Adorable... you can sing and dance With the words...

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Marilyn Lott

Marilyn Lott

Washington state USA
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