! A Clever Poem Poem by Linda Ori

! A Clever Poem

Rating: 3.1


What a clever poem I wrote!
Don't you think it's great?

Let me serve you garbage
Brightly garnished on a plate;
Pile it high with rotten eggs,
Tuna fish and slime,
Top it off with whipping cream
This tasty dish of mine;
Now, some of you will love the taste
And some of you will not -
I guess your education
Will determine what is rot
And what is pure perfection,
It's a simple thing to judge -
Some will choose vanilla
And the others choose the fudge;

It's a matter of perspective,
What you like and what you don't -
Some of you'll appreciate
My taste, while others won't;
But still I'll dish the menue,
Serve it up with great aplomb -
Though I think it's a clever poem
You may think it's a bomb!

8/09/2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 11 August 2008

A clever poem Linda! A full course meal and thought provoking feast, to quench one's appetite - A tasty perspective for sure! *10*! Best wishes, Friend Thad

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Each to their own, you say tomatoes (etc) , and I think, yep, a clever poem indeed! t x

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Js Black 10 August 2008

I'm a huge fan of 'clever' poems. Nothing wrong with having fun with what you write from time to time. Great job! ...Jeff.

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Ramesh T A 10 August 2008

I presume skill is what needed above all To make others feel what you think!

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Callie Carroll 10 August 2008

Indeed very clever! !

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