A Cloudy Day Poem by Charles Garcia

A Cloudy Day

Rating: 4.9


Cloudy skies obscure your view,
A slight breeze moves the clouds,
Letting in the sun-shine open up a broken sky.

A sight of blue shines through:
A warm breeze caresses your face,
Making you feel at ease.

Reminding you of the days gone by,

Sorting all anxieties leaving your
Mind free and at ease.

For a heart be none but innocent,
Giving all it has for free.

Charles Garcia
Monday, January 16,2006

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pia Andersson 12 November 2006

A whispering tender poem...you write with beauty and wisdom Tahnk you for writiing this uplifting poem!

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Anjana Aravind 26 May 2006

Yes, Gentle is the word which come to mind. Nice poem. Anjana

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R H 15 April 2006

I really like the gentleness of this poem - the notion that the wind can clear our minds just as it moves the clouds to reveal a clear blue sky. Kind regards, Justine.

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Christine K. Trease 01 March 2006

This poem really seems to capture the way a cloudy day can make you feel. Nice to read!

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Duncan Wyllie 28 January 2006

Dear Charles 'A slight breeze moves the clouds'.Excellent-Powerful line! A Poet I suspect who didn't know it. Love Duncan

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Chima Ononogbu 03 September 2019

The poem is beautifully expressing the power of nature over human life. Nice words used to paint the pictures.

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Diane Violet 27 April 2007

A pleasurable poem which leads one into serenity. Very beautiful Charles. All the best, Diane

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jkd jkd 28 March 2007

I like that poem - makes me feel free and easy - thx.kat

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Melvina Germain 26 March 2007

A true poet indeed, your words are beautiful and give the feeling of warmth and calmness. Thankyou so much for this most beautiful poem.---Melvina---

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Sandra Fowler 06 February 2007

What a beautiful skyscape your words have painted. You are a poet worthy of the name. Kindest regards, Sandra

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