A Cloudy Day Poem by Charles Garcia

A Cloudy Day

Rating: 4.9

Cloudy skies obscure your view,
A slight breeze moves the clouds,
Letting in the sun-shine open up a broken sky.

A sight of blue shines through:
A warm breeze caresses your face,
Making you feel at ease.

Reminding you of the days gone by,

Sorting all anxieties leaving your
Mind free and at ease.

For a heart be none but innocent,
Giving all it has for free.

Charles Garcia
Monday, January 16,2006

Anjana Aravind 26 May 2006

Yes, Gentle is the word which come to mind. Nice poem. Anjana

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Pia Andersson 12 November 2006

A whispering tender poem...you write with beauty and wisdom Tahnk you for writiing this uplifting poem!

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Duncan Wyllie 28 January 2006

Dear Charles 'A slight breeze moves the clouds'.Excellent-Powerful line! A Poet I suspect who didn't know it. Love Duncan

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Christine K. Trease 01 March 2006

This poem really seems to capture the way a cloudy day can make you feel. Nice to read!

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R H 15 April 2006

I really like the gentleness of this poem - the notion that the wind can clear our minds just as it moves the clouds to reveal a clear blue sky. Kind regards, Justine.

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Chima Ononogbu 03 September 2019

The poem is beautifully expressing the power of nature over human life. Nice words used to paint the pictures.

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Diane Violet 27 April 2007

A pleasurable poem which leads one into serenity. Very beautiful Charles. All the best, Diane

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jkd jkd 28 March 2007

I like that poem - makes me feel free and easy - thx.kat

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Melvina Germain 26 March 2007

A true poet indeed, your words are beautiful and give the feeling of warmth and calmness. Thankyou so much for this most beautiful poem.---Melvina---

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Sandra Fowler 06 February 2007

What a beautiful skyscape your words have painted. You are a poet worthy of the name. Kindest regards, Sandra

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