Wednesday, December 23, 2009

A Cold Grey Wintry Day Comments

Rating: 4.9

On this cold, gray-wintry day,
The sun is nowhere to be found.

Listen! I hear the rain:
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Walterrean Salley
COMMENTS
Nicole Settimi 07 September 2018

'Like a sad song, its music play To the melancholy lyric of: “A Cold, Gray Wintry Day.” Last three lines are everything. I appreciate this poem greatly. Xx NDS

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Amar Agarwala 03 March 2017

So inspired I have been by this poem... that I too wrote one on a - Winter's Day. Its in the list of new poems today.

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Rebecca Navarre 26 November 2016

Oh Wow! ! ! Is This Ever Perfectly Painted! ! ! Can Hear It, See It, Feel It! ! ! A Comforting Melancholy Song Beautifully Strong! ! ! Touching And Inspiring For All! ! ! Such Depths! ! ! You're Very Blessed! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Sharing This! ! ! 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Added To Favorites! ! !

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Walterrean Salley 04 December 2016

Thank you Rebecca. Your comments are invaluable.

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Unwritten Soul 16 June 2016

You are such a deep observer...and from a little thing it can be a bigger scene...to knock every minds...of the time and sounds...beautiful craft :) . Loved it

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Walterrean Salley 04 December 2016

Thank you Soul doe your Inestimable comments.

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Valsa George 29 March 2013

The natural rhythm of the rain is so cooling as your poem! Simple and musical! !

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Danny Draper 25 March 2012

A tune of winter in precipitation the seasons ring in conversation, each a character demanding appreciation, play no favourites as they rotate through station, each a seed in our imagination. I loved this poem, great effort. I love when we try to capture sounds in words and in turn their tune and lyrics, nicely done. I tried to catch a clock ticking in my poem I could not sleep, which was fun to contplate.

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Ray Schreiber 30 January 2012

You have indeed captured the sad tune of raindrops on a grey wintry day... well done.

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 December 2009

Sun is always there only our eyes fails to see.

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Sandra Fowler 26 December 2009

Winter moods and rain have a definite connection. And you are in tune with the weather. Grey is a favorite poetry color of mine. Ten for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Ray Schreiber 25 December 2009

Very nice...lovely picture, well rendered portrait of a moment in time defining a universal experience. Through your poem my minds eye sees your day, written with enough space to fill in the details of days I've known. Well done.

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Adjei Agyei-Baah 24 December 2009

Very simple poem with an interesting title which finally turned into the title of either a song or a movie.Kindly read this poem of mine: RAIN RAIN TAP ON MY ROOF and give your comment

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Walterrean Salley

Walterrean Salley

Savannah, Ga
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