A Comment On A Poem By Gajanan Mishra: In X-Ray At Poemhunter Poem by Ravi Kopra

A Comment On A Poem By Gajanan Mishra: In X-Ray At Poemhunter



Mishra ji, I like your passion for writing poetry.
But it is entertaining nevertheless!

And many a time your poetry brings smiles
For obvious and not so obvious reasons.

X rays can tell you more than your words
for your belly pain, for example.
Or breathing problems, or broken bones.

You will say - pain pain and cry
X-rays will say - broken bones

you will say - cough, no breath
X-rays will say - pneumonia, bronchitis, asthma

and all your confusions will go away
you will come home form doctor's office with medicine

and your wife will make you some coffee
and tuck you in your bed under a warm blanket

lie closer to you to give you more warmth
and perhaps give you a kiss or two

when at your Indian home
your kids, your parents are not around

and you will heal in no time
and say to your wife - I love you.

Wednesday, December 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: comedy,poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poemhunter does not accept comments larger then 300 Characters. Hence this comment here.

The original poem by Mishra ji that prompted all this -

In X Ray - Poem by Gajanan Mishra
Nothing clear
In x-ray.
Jumbled up
All today.

Itself,
Myself and
Yourself
All black,
All soundless,
All valueless.

Life go
With words
Puzzled,
Horrible all.

Gajanan Mishra
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 20 December 2017

Thanks, Ravi Kopraji, I salute you.Stay blessed.

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Ravi Kopra 20 December 2017

Mishra ji, enjoy poetry writing. I may come back to your poems again.

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Savita Tyagi 20 December 2017

Hahaha! Good fun poem to read. However Mishraji is correct too. X-rays don’t always reveal everything either!

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