A Committed Man In This Lagoon. Poem by Thampi KEE
A Committed Man In This Lagoon.
I could never imagine
And ever fall in love
And know our love
And I could ever like parting of my nation and race…..
I’ll be here ultimately for everything.
I’ll be here, to share their love and fun.
I’ll love their posture and pride
And I could never imagine a parting of this race
And this side of our great nation
And this side of our loving race
I’ll be let my heart to feel free to forget
I’ll be mad our love to each other
I’ll be need a lover - a devil
Share my bliss, share my life
I promise I will be for whom
Share my fun share my life
You said a communist
You said a committed man
Is all we committed?
Committed really embrace you!
I could never imagine
And ever fall in this love…
And know our love in this committed race,
I` ll love your posture and pride
Litany you made, a queer to me….
I` ll mad the prude thy made
The Cute smell of your words…
I wish to add..
Very nice its as if I am taking this ride with you..........very good! ! ! :)
Beautifully written! Why don't you write more of this stuff? Sorry I missed this poem earlier! !
Stupendous.Love to race and culture has added a different odor to it.
It is amazing that you can be so very deep. I adore this poem and your writing. Keep believing, my friend.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:09:14 AM # 1.0.0
A committed man in this lagoon-this title is really apt to it, the poem and the poet is unified in tone, sense of sorrow operates through the whole part giving beautiful image of race and nation.well crafted, keep writing--