A Conversation With You Poem by Nikunj Sharma

A Conversation With You

Rating: 5.0


You are the breath I take;
You are the brain I rake.
You live afresh in my beat;
Your presence is soul's treat.

You are the mote that;
Dances in the sunbeam,
You are the ray that;
Makes whole world gleam.

You are wave that crashes on rock;
You are force that turns the clock.
You are the sigma of the whole;
You are the derivative;
That shows the goal.

You the sky and the bird;
You are alone yet the herd.
You are the mirror
And the reflection;
You are the action and reaction.

You are the ink that flows in my pen;
You are the fear that lives in den.
You are the sun, the ray and the shine;
You are the real, unreal and divine.

Let me bow my head for once;
Me a heady soul.
You are the mirage I chase
You are my goal……..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 29 June 2009

a great goal has been set. you have a long way to go. very nice write voted10 surya

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Surya . 29 June 2009

a great goal has been set. you have a long way to go. very nice write voted10 surya

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Anjali Sinha 29 June 2009

woww that YOU YOU YOU is all great connection and conversation -10 anjali

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Mamta Agarwal 30 June 2009

you are the ink that flows in my pen- lovely poem, a great converseation 10 Mamta

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Lady Grace 30 June 2009

a nice one of course..well done..grace

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Deborah Cromer 13 November 2009

I have already commented on this, but reading it again, I have to comment again. There is really alot of honor realized here. I love the devotion and recognition you display and give. Very touching with added grace. Good work. Debbie

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Ritty Patnaik 07 September 2009

dear nikunj, it is a beautiful prayer from your heart to the almighty.i have a similar poem called, 'a conversation with god'.sometimes god answers! my best wishes to you. ritty

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Ravi Sathasivam 01 September 2009

You have describe this poem very well. Meaningful images are shown well too Great stuff. Enjoyed reading it

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Rehana Nazli 19 August 2009

Wow! ! You said everything in one go..breath taking! 19th August.09 Rehana Nazli

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Well done Nikunj. You have included meaningful images throughout your thoughtful poem. The last stanza worked beautifully to 'undress' who you was! 10 Karin Anderson

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