You are the breath I take;
You are the brain I rake.
You live afresh in my beat;
Your presence is soul's treat.
You are the mote that;
Dances in the sunbeam,
You are the ray that;
Makes whole world gleam.
You are wave that crashes on rock;
You are force that turns the clock.
You are the sigma of the whole;
You are the derivative;
That shows the goal.
You the sky and the bird;
You are alone yet the herd.
You are the mirror
And the reflection;
You are the action and reaction.
You are the ink that flows in my pen;
You are the fear that lives in den.
You are the sun, the ray and the shine;
You are the real, unreal and divine.
Let me bow my head for once;
Me a heady soul.
You are the mirage I chase
You are my goal……..
a great goal has been set. you have a long way to go. very nice write voted10 surya
woww that YOU YOU YOU is all great connection and conversation -10 anjali
you are the ink that flows in my pen- lovely poem, a great converseation 10 Mamta
I have already commented on this, but reading it again, I have to comment again. There is really alot of honor realized here. I love the devotion and recognition you display and give. Very touching with added grace. Good work. Debbie
dear nikunj, it is a beautiful prayer from your heart to the almighty.i have a similar poem called, 'a conversation with god'.sometimes god answers! my best wishes to you. ritty
You have describe this poem very well. Meaningful images are shown well too Great stuff. Enjoyed reading it
Wow! ! You said everything in one go..breath taking! 19th August.09 Rehana Nazli
Well done Nikunj. You have included meaningful images throughout your thoughtful poem. The last stanza worked beautifully to 'undress' who you was! 10 Karin Anderson
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a great goal has been set. you have a long way to go. very nice write voted10 surya