A Day In My Wife's Life Poem by Putholi Arumugham T
A Day In My Wife's Life
A bead in her eyes reflects
my restless years.
Her strained smile in lips
recalls her hopeful days.
Has my words still survive
my long diminshed soul? -
I may never know.
Will anyone tell her that all my love
has decayed to pain and scars
I have nothing left in me
Am impotent to deliver poems.
The bead rolls down
as my yet another day.
Quite touchy and sad..read it 3 times to get the full meaning cos i thought the title of the poem didn't fit the poem but I think its gud. Would give an 8! !
liked this write for the sentiment and sensitiveness it displays...10
This is the mark of true poetry- writing from your heart. Great job! You might want to reformat the title, though, as Ency Bearis commented on. It will reflect your poem more clearly.
a very significant write...and well versed on poetic creativity....nice but something just to say how the title constructed...it shoud be A DAY IN MY WIFE'S LIFE - the apostrophe in S to make a singular if you want the plural meaning - (a lot of women) -should be WIVES
It's well written. really like the way you worded everything. ;)
a well written ode to a day in your wifes life, a unexpected sad twist at the ending
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 3:18:03 AM # 1.0.0
wow what a great words its so nice i loved it keep it up thanks a lot for your care