The Loveliest Poem I Ever Wrote

Rating: 4.9
The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was with almost a dozen couplets
my fingers sang, when they met yours -
the glimmer in your eyes said it all.

The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was the quadrets born when my lips
and yours gently interwove -
the shiver in your hands shown it small.

The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was the sonnets my body composed
every time it stroked yours in rhythm -
the murmer in your lips claimed it tall.

The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was the haiku my heart pronounced
when I showered love deep within you -
the tremor in your body praised it well.

The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was the hymn born from silence
when my soul mixed with yours -
the flower in your womb is my nobel.
Friday, March 27, 2009
Aparna Sinha 13 July 2009
ha ha...this is poetry! ! it has rhyme, a rhythm, beauty and wisdom.... great! ! perfect 10
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Gina Layog 22 April 2009
your poetry, truly sensual, the touch of love, the bloom of romance, words that reveal, the soul of the lover, to his beloved....
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Wildan F Rabbani 14 April 2009
Lovely poem, but you still can write more lovely poems keep writing..
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Ency Bearis 13 April 2009
a great introspection..substantial of a poet creativeness of verses..well penned...
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Charlotte Andreski 11 April 2009
Very sensual and romantic, but open and true. Amazing phrasing, great use of the elements.
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Kranthi Pothineni 11 April 2009
Its really sweet and romantic.I liked the layout of the poem too, the way it is structured. The repetition is good. On a whole lovely lines.
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a lovely poem...sacred and sensual like love and life
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Reshma Ramesh 03 April 2009
wow..............this is soooooooooo beautiful...tender and filled with love
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Jyoti Joseph 01 April 2009
a lovely forced me to just look into my heart and feel the way you expressed...awesome...i will give 10+ for this thanks
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Demi Buxton 01 April 2009
i think that your poems are very gracefull and down to heart and in away they are all link together sort of but i think they are good and keep writing
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