The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was with almost a dozen couplets
my fingers sang, when they met yours -
the glimmer in your eyes said it all.
The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was the quadrets born when my lips
and yours gently interwove -
the shiver in your hands shown it small.
The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was the sonnets my body composed
every time it stroked yours in rhythm -
the murmer in your lips claimed it tall.
The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was the haiku my heart pronounced
when I showered love deep within you -
the tremor in your body praised it well.
The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was the hymn born from silence
when my soul mixed with yours -
the flower in your womb is my nobel.
A tender and loving poem, filled with wonderful sentiments. A few small typos, otherwise nicely written. Linda
i think that your poems are very gracefull and down to heart and in away they are all link together sort of but i think they are good and keep writing
a lovely poem...it forced me to just look into my heart and feel the way you expressed...awesome...i will give 10+ for this thanks
ha ha...this is poetry! ! it has rhyme, a rhythm, beauty and wisdom.... great! ! perfect 10
your poetry, truly sensual, the touch of love, the bloom of romance, words that reveal, the soul of the lover, to his beloved....
Lovely poem, but you still can write more lovely poems keep writing..
a great introspection..substantial of a poet creativeness of verses..well penned...
Very sensual and romantic, but open and true. Amazing phrasing, great use of the elements.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
awww i luv it its was amazing well done 9+