poet Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

-+forever+++

You are my everything
'Cause in everything I do
It's always a part of you.
And because I love you,
You are my everything.

I'm doing everything for you.
You're capable of making
All my dreams come true.
You can make them happening.
You make my life complete.

I share all I have and am.
I share all that is to come.
You're the light inside my eyes.
I want to keep you forever.
I share all I am with you.

I want that everything around,
Which doesn't belong to you,
Not to belong to me, too...
'Cause it has never been
A part of everything I mean...

Baby, nothing exists forever,
Let's build a world of love together.
And when we will not be alive,
Our feelings will survive
One more day and the eternity.

Topic(s) of this poem: eternity, love

Poem Submitted: Friday, May 15, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, June 3, 2016

Form: Blues Poem


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Comments about -+forever+++ by Marieta Maglas

  • Ritty Patnaik (3/23/2010 8:41:00 AM)

    dear mari........forever and eternity are great words for one in love.touched with this love poem which is full of honest promises.for the moment of time it is precious! warm regards to you.......ritty

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (3/10/2010 4:55:00 PM)

    From: Gaurav Awasthi (lucknow India; Male; 19)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 3/9/2010 3: 48: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: hey i hv just read


    and would like to let u know that forever is the best i ever heard................love it

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  • Sandra Fowler (1/21/2010 10:16:00 AM)

    A day can seem like eternity. And true love
    is always selfless. Touching write.You
    have a way with words.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra

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  • Heather Quail (1/20/2010 10:41:00 AM)

    I think you did a wonderful job in writing this, u captured the true feelings.10+

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  • Prince Obed de la CruzPrince Obed de la Cruz (1/5/2010 5:49:00 AM)

    what a noble write here! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/29/2009 10:12:00 PM)

    And if I will never meet you again
    My feelings for you
    Will survive this day
    And all the eternity..............so much honest and dedicated feelings.........10

    at bay.............. i miss.........fine without you

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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALEPERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (12/21/2009 3:17:00 PM)

    a touching love poem, beautiful, thanks for sharing 10

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (12/8/2009 12:04:00 PM)

    this day, and all eternity... now that is love

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  • Ravi SathasivamRavi Sathasivam (12/1/2009 10:42:00 PM)

    Very beautiful poem.
    Well penned
    Enjoyed reading it
    10+

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  • Gabrielle Love (12/1/2009 1:56:00 PM)

    This is a really beautiful poem. It kinda sounds like me write now. keep it up x0x0x0-Gabbie

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  • Shelly Shelly (11/21/2009 11:23:00 AM)

    And if I will never meet you again
    My feelings for you
    Will survive this day
    And all the eternity.

    simply brilliant piece of writing..i must say..last stanza was superb

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  • Gary Morgan (11/16/2009 2:45:00 PM)

    this poem is wonederful.....
    this is the type of things i try
    to stop writing but find myself going back to it

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  • Chance (11/10/2009 5:02:00 PM)

    very nice i like it
    it reminds me of things in my past.....
    i think i will go write now....

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  • Bushra Hussaini (11/7/2009 10:07:00 PM)

    very sweet ang cute, keep it up! !

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  • Rachel Butler (11/5/2009 2:38:00 PM)

    'My love'

    Rachel Ann Butler

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  • Kranthi Pothineni (11/2/2009 9:11:00 PM)

    Lovely expression all through its length. Fine ending too.10 for your expression.

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  • Roy Martinez (10/30/2009 2:57:00 PM)

    such an emotion last forever
    10

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  • Margaret Donaghy (10/30/2009 1:38:00 PM)

    Love can be eternal but only if mutual
    10

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  • Dawn Darkheart (10/28/2009 1:27:00 PM)

    beautiful poem your fab
    im impressed

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  • Ramin ChamanRamin Chaman (10/13/2009 5:04:00 PM)

    ...
    Will survive
    In the eternity.

    ''
    A good work..
    Of a genus indestructibility..
    Or quality of being indestructible..


    10+

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