Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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A Difficult Separation

Rating: 4.8

First time in life I came to know what is separation
I had read enough about it in books with simple narration
I took it lightly with single meaning of staying away
Only for few days or months to be free from her sway

Many husbands may be wanting complete freedom form her yoke
They may enter into cheap comments about her and cut rude jokes
They may feel her association with them as real curse
They simply forget that she is the only person who can heal or nurse

In reality it is altogether different from what we think or profess
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Aminath Neena Haneef 30 April 2010

Such a sweet poem.... yes it is true that one always realize the true worth of something after parting with it.. thanks for sharing such beauty

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Erica Santana 30 April 2010

I too agree you express alot of emotion. I felt like I was in it

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Seema Chowdhury 28 April 2010

sir, this is such a nice poem full of emotions and realities. your wife should be very proud of you and herself. while reading this beautiful poem, i could see the tenderness flowing through each word smoothly. very well written and well composed poem. thanks for sharing.

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Alexander Mcguire 27 April 2010

wow i like it cant say i can relate bc ive never been maried but i kno wat its like to loose someone you hav become codependant with the bittersweetness

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Shifa Tauqir 02 May 2010

wow you really pulled me in the story...emotions very well expressed

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Gita Ashok 25 June 2010

Such a touching and emotional string of words built up to form a beautiful garland!

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Landsley Alexandre 08 May 2010

great poem I LIKE the fact that you took your time to describe every little details

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Lady Grace 06 May 2010

expressive...nicely done with fine far as we know, everything has its, ur piece expressess nice sentiments..

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Deepti Agarwal 04 May 2010

Very sweet ellaborative flow of emotions..weaved in a single string... :)

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Raahu Selaama 03 May 2010

A heartbeat has more feeling when tender is its touch. Genuine is loves key. Good poem.

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