A Dream.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

A Dream....

Rating: 5.0


Last night I dreamt
since years never dreamt anymore

was it a dream?
a wake?
awake?
or a nightmare?

no shouts
with bouts

no real shadows
but it looks like
everyone follows
...................me


© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved

Saturday, May 23, 2020
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
was it a dream?
a wake?
awake?
or a nightmare?

no shouts
with bouts

no real shadows
but it looks like
everyone follows
...................me


© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A poignant write. Sometimes our dreams give us thoughts to ponder about. The ultimate stanza is thought provoking. A well crafted write vividly depicted.

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Thank you so much once again. Have a nice day, Mrs. Juan-Austin and God's great Blessings!

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Just a simple verse, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin, but I had the urge to publish that on PH, thank so much for reading and evaluating, absolutely, the ultimate stanza can be understood in several ways.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 May 2020

No shouts with bouts and with no sound, dreams come slowly and sometimes nightmares frighten. Sometimes dreams give us amazing perception and pleasantness. Your last night's dream values more as you have penned an interesting poem here. This is a surprise to see a dream after a year or many years. This poem is interesting.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 May 2020

Dreams are natural and sometimes these are supernatural. When we sleep we see dreams and motivate lives with greater excellence. Sometimes we get many indications in dreams. Reality of perception works at the moment of dream. You are a nice observer and beautifully observed life's natural perception. Reading a poem in Dutch about dream is very interesting. This poem is very nicely and excellently penned....10 @**

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Sylvia Frances Chan

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Jakarta, Indonesia
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