A Dream Terror Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

A Dream Terror

Rating: 5.0


A Dream Terror

I dreamed of an unexpected error
the dream was nice at any price
but I wasn't wise
tell me, why not, little mice?

I dreamed of an unexpected error,
it turned out to be a terror,
woke up with a big fright
it was haunting me all the night

Consider it done
affordable
but not translatable

The entrance had an error
A big terror occurred
not wounded,
but my heart was hurt

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 04 September 2022

that last line stopped me in my tracks--- yours is such a generous and loving heart that I wanted to rescue your heart and protect it from all night terrors and day terrors too! ! ! ! 5 stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 September 2022

Dear Susan, thank you for your great response and the FIVE Stars! I appreciate your visiit very much.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 September 2022

A very straightforward and heartfelt write. So touching yet with a great punch. Brilliantly expressed..full of wit. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 September 2022

Cont. God will always wrap your heart with His love and all the goodness in life. I concur with the wonderful comments of Susan. Bless your heart my friend.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 September 2022

I can feel your hurt, my friend. Yet, you have a beautiful heart and mind, always will be. You will overcome this hurt.God always wrap your heart with all His love

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PREMKUMAR C N 06 September 2022

Beautiful poem with excellent rhyme.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 September 2022

Thank you for your precious visit most appreciated, dear Poet-Painter

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 September 2022

This is absolutely a wonderful poem...I viewed it in three -dimensional angle. Loved it

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 September 2022

WOW! My poem you viewed in three dimensional angle, what a greatest discovery, dear Poet, thank you so much!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 September 2022

Dear Poet, I appreciate very much your visit to my poem site, Thank you greatly for the way you have read my poem. Thank you

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