A Dream Terror
I dreamed of an unexpected error
the dream was nice at any price
but I wasn't wise
tell me, why not, little mice?
I dreamed of an unexpected error,
it turned out to be a terror,
woke up with a big fright
it was haunting me all the night
Consider it done
affordable
but not translatable
The entrance had an error
A big terror occurred
not wounded,
but my heart was hurt
A very straightforward and heartfelt write. So touching yet with a great punch. Brilliantly expressed..full of wit. To my Poem List.
Cont. God will always wrap your heart with His love and all the goodness in life. I concur with the wonderful comments of Susan. Bless your heart my friend.
I can feel your hurt, my friend. Yet, you have a beautiful heart and mind, always will be. You will overcome this hurt.God always wrap your heart with all His love
Thank you for your precious visit most appreciated, dear Poet-Painter
This is absolutely a wonderful poem...I viewed it in three -dimensional angle. Loved it
WOW! My poem you viewed in three dimensional angle, what a greatest discovery, dear Poet, thank you so much!
Dear Poet, I appreciate very much your visit to my poem site, Thank you greatly for the way you have read my poem. Thank you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
that last line stopped me in my tracks--- yours is such a generous and loving heart that I wanted to rescue your heart and protect it from all night terrors and day terrors too! ! ! ! 5 stars
Dear Susan, thank you for your great response and the FIVE Stars! I appreciate your visiit very much.