A Dream Other Than Dreams Poem by Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur

A Dream Other Than Dreams

Rating: 5.0


The nights create,
mights and hidden,
events,
and DARWEN dancing,
with monkeys,
as he was like grandpa,
no,
or yes,
he was,
with hairless skin,
and holding,
stair shaped, ,
DNA helixes
arginine guanine guanine
arginine guanine arginine
with counted list of chromsome, and genes,
and moon above his head,
all trees full of monkeys,
and i was feeling alone,
on the bank of the river.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Justin M. Banks 23 July 2009

The last section was brilliant Doc.

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all trees full of monkeys, and i was feeling alone, on the bank of the river...... feeling all alone, , , delicate and heart feeling situation... very good write sir....... read mine all dreams not come true....you go all alone...butterflies around and anywhere

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an interesting dream beautiful way of writing..well done

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 June 2009

'and moon above his head, all trees full of monkeys, and i was feeling alone, on the bank of the river.' Marvelous write-nice ending.10+

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Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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