Dream takes my poet friend Greenwolfe
To be in heaven and in hell
Dream helps my friend to be
full of greed and lust.
He desires everything moral and immoral
To satisfy his greedy body.
When he is tired of heaven and happiness
Angels take him to hell
What great thing for my friend
He meets great people there.
When heaven and hell tired of my friend
Angels send him to GOD
Ah, what a great place
To live with GOD.
GOD smiles and thinks
Who has created this poet.
I like the ending, the humor. “Meets great people there” - interesting. Who could these people be? For poets dreams have no limit and, actually, we can go anywhere our imaginations take us.
If only we could control our dreams? What if our dreams became reality. I enjoyed this poem. Bob
Indeed a very intelligent poetic satire…and very masterly communicated… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
i have to disagree with u though its a nice picture of God smiling but it is kind of overstatment that is not quite o.k considering religion
god creates a poet u r apoet whom god feels happy for He desires everything moral and immoral To satisfy his greedy body. nice 10
A nice poem........................10++ Thanks for your nice comment on my poem Nature.
I love this poem, especially the last two lines are amazing- my 10 with it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
intersting theme. i liked the easy flow