Deepti Agarwal


A Drop! - Poem by Deepti Agarwal

A Drop rolled down
crystal clear, Salty....

Gone are the days
when,
the birds sang,
butterflies fluttered...

Gone are the days
when,
rain drops danced,
the trees swayed...

Its all gloomy and dark
birds,
butterflies,
trees, &
raindrops..
all are gone.

The dropp is still fresh and salty.

14/01/08


Comments about A Drop! by Deepti Agarwal

  • (1/27/2012 5:03:00 AM)


    Moved by it deeply! ! ! ! looking forward to see more work of you! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (8/19/2009 10:51:00 AM)


    deep and moving. when strong people break into tears, they are overwhelmed with many things apart from what they actual reason that makes them cry.10/10 realistic work. (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (7/1/2009 6:49:00 AM)


    nostalgic and a shade dark
    very well written...emotive

    cheers
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  • premji premji (6/22/2009 4:53:00 AM)


    dropps are becoming less salty when you pour out your feelings as poetry....10 (Report) Reply

  • (4/30/2009 4:12:00 AM)


    excepting the tear from the persoon.....rest of the mood is brought out through nature and other creatures around..when there is this gloom inside everything out would seem so....a superb write..itake this into my favs (Report) Reply

  • (6/1/2008 10:08:00 AM)


    Poem is nice as usual but don't mind it, a proof-reader's eyes never miss out any spelling mistakes. A 'p'is extra in 'dropp 'at the very end. Hope you are not angry. Thnx 4 the poem again. Keep smiling. LOL (Report) Reply

  • (5/23/2008 11:16:00 AM)


    the mood of sadness well captured, but God has made man so resilient that we snap out of our sad moments with time. (Report) Reply

  • Vidi Writes (5/6/2008 9:48:00 AM)


    Never worry about salty drops
    Its just purifier for your eyes
    When the eyes get clear vision
    You can see things in black and white
    Leave the black behind
    Go for the white ahead
    Ohh… it’s a wonderland we are in
    At any ant age, any cost, at any Drop
    We can’t stop enjoying this life.

    Hai na bolo bolo...? ?
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  • (4/9/2008 4:44:00 AM)


    yes... fresh... it is still rolling down incessantly!
    birds and butterflies are still around.
    may not be your, those old ones!
    so stop shedding salty drops and cheer up!
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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (4/3/2008 5:27:00 AM)


    time when bedazzled by the love
    yet the crooning by the history
    eyes when steeped in tears by the shadow
    dew seems to be befuddled by the sun
    rain yet drops blazing the glory of love....................yet wistful as hurtful, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing
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  • (4/2/2008 7:05:00 AM)


    a longing for past can clearly be felt here.I have also mourned for past in my poem 'yearning for bygone days'.But we shade tears for that thing which we can never get back in our life.Its better to forget past and look for present. so we should enjoy every moment. nicely done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 1, 2008


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