A Drop! Poem by Deepti Agarwal

A Drop!

Rating: 5.0

A Drop rolled down
crystal clear, Salty....

Gone are the days
the birds sang,
butterflies fluttered...

Gone are the days
rain drops danced,
the trees swayed...

Its all gloomy and dark
trees, &
all are gone.

The dropp is still fresh and salty.


Vaibhav Shah 02 April 2008

a longing for past can clearly be felt here.I have also mourned for past in my poem 'yearning for bygone days'.But we shade tears for that thing which we can never get back in our life.Its better to forget past and look for present. so we should enjoy every moment. nicely done.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 03 April 2008

time when bedazzled by the love yet the crooning by the history eyes when steeped in tears by the shadow dew seems to be befuddled by the sun rain yet drops blazing the glory of love....................yet wistful as hurtful, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Kesav Easwaran 09 April 2008

yes... fresh... it is still rolling down incessantly! birds and butterflies are still around. may not be your, those old ones! so stop shedding salty drops and cheer up!

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Vidi Writes 06 May 2008

Never worry about salty drops Its just purifier for your eyes When the eyes get clear vision You can see things in black and white Leave the black behind Go for the white ahead Ohh… it’s a wonderland we are in At any ant age, any cost, at any Drop We can’t stop enjoying this life. Hai na bolo bolo...? ?

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Mamta Agarwal 23 May 2008

the mood of sadness well captured, but God has made man so resilient that we snap out of our sad moments with time.

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Deep Mukherjee 27 January 2012

Moved by it deeply! ! ! ! looking forward to see more work of you! !

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Mystic Indian 19 August 2009

deep and moving. when strong people break into tears, they are overwhelmed with many things apart from what they actual reason that makes them cry.10/10 realistic work.

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Saadat Tahir 01 July 2009

nostalgic and a shade dark very well written...emotive cheers

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premji premji 22 June 2009

dropps are becoming less salty when you pour out your feelings as poetry....10

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excepting the tear from the persoon.....rest of the mood is brought out through nature and other creatures around..when there is this gloom inside everything out would seem so....a superb write..itake this into my favs

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