A Farewell Poem by Dr subhendu kar

A Farewell

Rating: 5.0


as when the clouds of fear cover
that may take away all the smiles
simply over the faith of trust as prevailed
on the milieu of beauty, love and bliss

as when stormed by the thunders
casting the shadows by darkness
leave the deep scars as coursed
by blackness as when precipitates

that reasons the angels when shocked
to go away with eyes steeped in tears
the heart yet hurtful as ruined by blemishes
leaving the friends in the memory lane

when embracing all the raved up smooches
the thoughts of share in deep ecstasy of resonance
of love and beauty as reasoned when dazzled
then and there at our time when we share

and the time makes us as what we are
yet reasoned by wishes of God as believed
yet I accord wishes though being hurtful
with all gracious gestures but being rugged red

while bidding farewell from a place like a home
to the divine souls as when disowned by the gloom
rocks up the heart with rueful grin in deterrence
as few drops of tears falling when cruised
but with the rain in remorse as when pained by the sorrow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elysabeth Faslund 24 November 2007

Magnificently beautiful in thoughts behind your amazing images...may your God keep a copy of this poem next to his easy chair...he has to rest sometime! xxxElysabeth

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Thad Wilk 24 November 2007

Hi Dr Kar! This is a beautifully written poem, sad but great in content! ! ! ** 10 **! ! ! Thad

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Sherry Arzish 25 November 2007

sad poignant and exceedingly beautiful

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Ewigi Liebe 27 November 2007

My friends to you I bid goodbye To the friendship that brought me sky The year has been swell As if coming from a wishing well But as all things do I have to bid adieu How it pains me to But there's nothing I can do Thank you for the memories The laughter and the tears They'll linger in my heart As if we never part If by chance we meet again May it be full of blessings in the rain Yet for now all that I can say Is to God for you I'll pray.

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Riquetta Elliott 20 October 2008

This is a very wonderful poem Mr. Kar

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bjanka im 18 August 2008

picturesque the pain, nostalgia the sense as there s something wrong with your bones, as organs inside are shifting, ' scrambling' great, great pain and yet setting free, feeling the coming of the numbness and then.... nothing can hurt you any more and the angels shed dried tears on the ground

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Tsira Goge 23 March 2008

I became the witness very sad farewell... 10... Tsira

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Marvin Brato 06 December 2007

All must go in many ways, its human destiny! Just the passing of my boss Gerardo Cunanan ' Always Be Remembered', Thanks for sharing, a 10.

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Patrice James 29 November 2007

dont have to be on this way....oh my, why everybody must go!

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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