Thursday, July 28, 2005

A Feeling For Snow

Rating: 4.0
seemingly dancing
on blank snow,
flecks illuminate light
generating warmth
in the hearth
of one's life stone
where fiery coal burns
mined by a harbinger
holding the breath
of one's own body and soul-
riding on currents of
rebirth, in winter
Adryan Barnathan
Duncan Wyllie 24 March 2006
This is cleansing and so important a lesson in any season.Love Duncan
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David Gerardino 30 December 2005
NICE POEM...................................
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Michael Whitt 07 December 2005
'...riding the currents of rebirth...' yea.....!
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Raynette Eitel 17 September 2005
This is the first of your work I've read, Adrienne, and so now I want to read it all, slowly, savoring each word. Thanks. Raynette
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Suitcase Girl 31 August 2005
This is beautiful. My favourite from what I have read of yours so far!
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Uriah Hamilton 29 July 2005
I like the sound of the poem, the short lines, and it is different to think of rebirth in winter.
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