A Five Miles Turn Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

A Five Miles Turn

Rating: 4.8


It was after a while
You had a new bicycle
Ocean blue with tri-colors stripes
Six speeds and a gear pipe
Your 14th birthday gift
Another miles adrift
Bridging our distance
Is a five miles turn

Ocean blue bicycle
You come with a smile
Spends time in my cubicle
With your usual style
Smooth talking
We study
We kiss
Another day would be promising
Orgy
What bliss
A five miles turn
And awaiting kiss
Would churn
The tender hearts

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pablo Cruise 24 March 2009

Wonderful words. From one cyclist to another, Bravo.

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Chitra - 25 August 2008

a novel write! enjoyed it

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Adeline Foster 21 August 2008

Hello Yusof: A wonderful poem with the flavor of Emily Dickenson, an American poet whom I love dearly. I often use her works in my poetry class at Hagerstown Community College. This one has whimsical feeling but well constructed. You write very well. Of course I want you to read some of mine. Adeline Foster

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Kee Thampi 19 March 2008

a real love with a feel of life Ocean blue bicycle You come with a smile Spend time in my cubicle With your usual style Smooth talking We study

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