Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Rookie - 207 Points (Singapore)

A Journey Without Destiny - Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

The voices of hope......
Screaming for lives..
Were not fulfilled
The truth is
We can't handle the truth
Take me to the place...
Where the weather
Is fine all around
We could live
Till the world
Is no longer exists...
and remember
The arts of love
Implies to flirtation
Your longing....
Is descriptive
Well painted
onto the canvas of psychopath
A journey without destiny...
Is a long lost destination
Only the determined
Would understand
and nodded

Comments about A Journey Without Destiny by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • Madhabi Banerjee (4/11/2016 12:55:00 PM)

    amazing! thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • (9/2/2009 1:02:00 PM)

    Catching title once again and the poem is very touching. Well done

    'The truth is
    we can't handle the truth'

    my favorite part
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  • Evaughn Gray (2/28/2009 11:53:00 PM)

    i can't explain to you how beautiful this poem is.. all i can say is utterly amazing..~Hazel G.E (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2008 12:16:00 PM)

    DESTINY, , , , everybody has its depends on how you drive yourself into the destiny you wanted to be...uhummmm...another poem i read from you...can i kiss u for being a talented and gifted poet? mmmmmmuah, thats not a reward, , , , but its not a punishment ha..its just a sort of saying GOODNGHT... (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2008 3:34:00 AM)

    Wow, this poem is so great!
    But unfortunately, we all have destiny to do,
    If I have many choises without destiny, ,
    I'll pick up the happy ending one, , Everyone either, ,
    But the truth, we have to face the truth, ,

    Love this one!
    Naru Kaede, ,
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  • (11/28/2008 12:57:00 AM)

    well written! exellent poem, :) (Report) Reply

  • (9/15/2008 10:07:00 AM)

    very true
    'The truth is
    We can't handle the truth'
    +10 anjali
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  • (8/21/2008 8:08:00 PM)

    This poem caught my eye because I hav a daughter named Destiny. I could not fathom my life's journey without my Destiny. Great piece of work and I marked it
    as one of my favs.
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  • (8/13/2008 12:48:00 AM)

    title caught my eye. a fine poem, deeply reflective and thought provoking.10

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  • (8/12/2008 3:23:00 PM)

    really i tried so hard to find a poem of u that i will understand easily and completely coz really my english is not good enough maybe im better in arabic. but i found this and i liked it so much really so so great and i think that i fell in love with it and im sorry so sorry coz i did't take ur excuse.
    im sorry.
    (Report) Reply

  • (8/12/2008 8:35:00 AM)

    too true. too too true. VERY true! (Report) Reply

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (7/28/2008 9:44:00 AM)

    Yes i get it.....cleverly composed.
    10 has been clicked with joy!
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  • Dipika P (5/25/2008 10:40:00 AM)

    'splendid'...keep writing like this :) (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2008 10:58:00 PM)

    I understand but disagree..
    I went, , I got lost, ,
    I ran away into space and went psychotic..
    But for that I found myself, , ,
    Go, , , , or don’t, ,
    But speak not if not..(only metaphor)
    Nice read
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  • (5/6/2008 4:05:00 PM)

    wow fullfill your destiny, heart and soul i love your poetry
    you have lot of energy in a state of mind. i like it.
    nice n deep poet.
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  • (5/6/2008 2:55:00 AM)

    Determination needs direction. Truth is a beautiful ancient empty vase which has been lost and nobody remembers what it looks like. (Report) Reply

  • (4/24/2008 11:17:00 PM)

    ‘ Will’ and ‘Destiny’, our life is a pendulum between so many ends
    man is a puppet in the hands of Fate….
    The lines here are deep in meaning….well composed.
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  • (4/22/2008 9:51:00 AM)

    really liked this one, keep up the good work (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2008 5:05:00 AM)

    this poem is great. its what im feeling right now, thanks i needed that (Report) Reply

  • (4/9/2008 12:59:00 PM)

    i like that poem a lot.
    Its so, soothing sorta in a way.
    Just butiful in the art of poetry
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 27, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 13, 2008

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