The man who wrote that
long..long..ago
was brought there to that moment
The man who reads that
now...me
was there at that moment
when i read now
what he wrote
so long..long ago
The past can merge with the present, the power of words is quite amazing 10 Lynda xx
tenderly does the past and present collide to inspire. a good read on a good write a ten
Your poem is bright in understanding and very aptly written with sentiments fully expressed.
Though there is no logical conclusion in this poem, it seems to spell a philosophy that seems embedded in coding. Decoding is difficult. mandara
words can transport us back in time....and too, into the future.....
The man who reads that now...me was there at that moment Nice imagery, delicate balance between past and future. excellent write. keep going.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is a Time Machine that takes you to the past as well as to the present brings the writer!