The man who wrote that
long..long..ago
was brought there to that moment
The man who reads that
now...me
was there at that moment
when i read now
what he wrote
so long..long ago
a good read, this is indeed. this is very deep..but great
brilliant corelation between the deeds of past and present regards sandhya
Your poem is bright in understanding and very aptly written with sentiments fully expressed.
Though there is no logical conclusion in this poem, it seems to spell a philosophy that seems embedded in coding. Decoding is difficult. mandara
words can transport us back in time....and too, into the future.....
The man who reads that now...me was there at that moment Nice imagery, delicate balance between past and future. excellent write. keep going.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
remarkable i believe... interesting, Sam! :)