A Greater Wisdom Poem by shweta advani

Thanks for the comment Shweta, your poem is well expressed too! We all need a greater wisdom, a guiding hand- a soul mate?

Stupidity is not that distant away from daredevilness...when we step out in 'dark', as you said and said well, we always 'need a hand to guard and guide'...good meaningful write, Shweta..10.

such wonderful poems bring their own light............................ John

this is a really great poem! .. the only thing i would say is the spelling of 'the'.. the 'd' kind of throws the poem off... but the poem itself is amazing.10++

Yes one needs shepherd but shepherd must be heavenly not earthly.....................Good Write.........

This is the earlier stage in the path of attaining wisdom.........all seekers of knowledge go through. But realizing that we need a Guru itself shows that the person has already reached the path...............What happens in the penultimate stage...........if u so wish........you may read my poem JEEVANMUKTHA. Very good poem........in fact more than a poem......wisdom

Clearly spells out the importance of a guide anywhere.

hi.....only a person with great wisdom can speak about such a greater wisdom so you already have that my friend......

It is wise to have help, ateacher to guide us through our difficulties. You write very well. 10+

High thinking at a young age! ! ! Congrats! Keep it up! 10+