O God!
Perhaps you were when annoyed of your full shyness,
that was the cause of your restlessness.
How many years you passed.
Millions, billions or trillions
I don't know.
Thinking and developing
the negative of your thoughts in a dark room
touching, retouching and giving it all the colors you have.
You enlarged it so much that its feet were on the earth
and hairs were covering the whole universe.
But you veiled this portrait until you created a lover
to admire and love this work of art.
And when you put the best of your love
in the bosom of a lover
you unveiled the portrait of this half shy woman.
What a wonderful expression dear Jawadji! Full of inspiration and joyness. God has created girl beautiful and with shyness which attract the lover. Beautifully composed. Thanks.
THE GAL IS REALLY CREATED BY GOD ONLY BEAUTIFULLER THAN MANY BOYS ALSO AKHTAR JAWAD
A wonderful poem, fabulous poetic imagination with dazzling expression…I would love to quote: But you veiled this portrait until you created a lover to admire and love this work of art.! Thanks a lot for sharing dear sir…10
Woman the most beautiful creation of God... Excellent poem Akhtar
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very beautiful girl (woman?) .... But you veiled this portrait until you created a lover to admire and love this work of art. And when you put the best of your love in the bosom of a lover you unveiled the portrait of this half shy woman. Very much an adorable photo and a poem....thank you....thanks a lot for your valuable comment on me as a poetess too...I feel honoured a lot Akhtar....thank you