Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 97,746 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

A Guide For Boys In Love - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

You are sitting on the bank of a lake,
Engaged in fishing and smoking with silence,
You are not interested in a particular fish,
Depending entirely on your fate for the day.

The fish may be beautiful or may be ugly,
A friend of your system or harmful for it,
It may suit to your taste,
Or just a food, for your hunger, so wild.

You are hungry and thirsty,
Just need a fish,
Being called by instinct.
Whether moral or immoral.

Bring your ears a little closer to my mouth,
Hunger of the girls are more intense,
But they know it well,
They may fish a snake.
What is inside the lake,
You are completely unaware,

(An immediate response to Yash Shinde's request)

Topic(s) of this poem: boyfriend

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wrote a poem 'A Guide For Girls In Love', Yash Shinde in her comments asked me to write a guide for boys. This is my immediate response.

Comments about A Guide For Boys In Love by Akhtar Jawad

  • Robert Murray Smith (1/18/2017 9:05:00 PM)

    Guide To Boys In Love
    An insight from a poet who has been a boy.+++10 (Report) Reply

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  • Melvina Germain (11/4/2015 9:53:00 PM)

    Interesting, poem from a male perspective, however women fish also and we will throw the snake back...Looking forward to reading the girls poem..... (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (3/28/2015 12:27:00 PM)

    Very thoughtful and erudite, reflects the practical side of the man woman relationships. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (1/11/2015 6:31:00 PM)

    An interesting write............................10 (Report) Reply

  • V P Mahur (6/25/2014 3:47:00 AM)

    Dear Bro,
    It is a very expressive poem with the flow of thoughts. Thanks for your words of appreciation about my poem.
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  • Piumi Wijenayake (5/28/2014 1:19:00 PM)

    Nice and interesting.........and it is the truth about the fish who is figuratively talks about the girls (Report) Reply

  • (5/19/2014 1:05:00 PM)

    very nice and inspiring..... loved it thanks for the advice anyway :) even though i don't really sense i'm meant by it but thanks in the name of others :) You've got some beautiful poems here.. keep it up - GoodLuck
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  • Matthias Pantaleon (5/15/2014 12:30:00 AM)

    Of cause what resides in the lake is a mystery to our eyes and understanding. (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee (5/12/2014 11:19:00 PM)

    Thanks for sharing this poem as well... (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2014 3:20:00 AM)

    I am a boy but I am not like this. All the five fingers are not of same size. (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde (4/29/2014 1:10:00 AM)

    An intense, deep write and obviously holds truth in its obscure verses....
    'If I am not wrong, fish is compared to a girl........If I am right, then surely, we 'Boys' surely want a girl for us, not really to soothe our heart but to satisfy our temptation.............
    A realistic write Uncle! .........and not to miss, hats off to your speed.......
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    The Poet Poet The Poet Poet (2/4/2017 7:20:00 AM)

    All young guys '
    ur age '
    love fish
    any one would do
    under the cover of darkness
    all are alike
    as we quench....
    we all did
    and You continue

  • (4/29/2014 1:06:00 AM)

    unlike the guide for the girls, this one is composed with subtlety. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 29, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 29, 2014

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