You are sitting on the bank of a lake,
Engaged in fishing and smoking with silence,
You are not interested in a particular fish,
Depending entirely on your fate for the day.
The fish may be beautiful or may be ugly,
A friend of your system or harmful for it,
It may suit to your taste,
Or just a food, for your hunger, so wild.
You are hungry and thirsty,
Just need a fish,
Being called by instinct.
Whether moral or immoral.
Bring your ears a little closer to my mouth,
Hunger of the girls are more intense,
But they know it well,
They may fish a snake.
What is inside the lake,
You are completely unaware,
(An immediate response to Yash Shinde's request)
unlike the guide for the girls, this one is composed with subtlety.
Dear Bro, It is a very expressive poem with the flow of thoughts. Thanks for your words of appreciation about my poem.
You are hungry and thirsty/Just need a fish/Being called by instinct/Whether moral or immoral...pragmatic expression sir! A wonderful poem..........................Full score!
ALL WOMEN Are very intelligent like once were guys all love to wish a while when they find one they are wise both gals and guys now a a days condomise
Beautiful poem......................................................
Interesting, poem from a male perspective, however women fish also and we will throw the snake back...Looking forward to reading the girls poem.....
Very thoughtful and erudite, reflects the practical side of the man woman relationships. Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An intense, deep write and obviously holds truth in its obscure verses.... 'If I am not wrong, fish is compared to a girl........If I am right, then surely, we 'Boys' surely want a girl for us, not really to soothe our heart but to satisfy our temptation............. A realistic write Uncle! .........and not to miss, hats off to your speed.......
All young guys ' ur age ' love fish any one would do under the cover of darkness all are alike as we quench.... we all did and You continue