A Home - Ένα Σπιτικό Poem by Kostas Lagos

A Home - Ένα Σπιτικό

Rating: 5.0


Building

A home

In the shadows



This starless night

Feeling almost

Complete





Χτίζω

Ένα σπιτικό

Μέσα στις σκιές



Νύχτα δίχως άστρα

Νιώθω σχεδόν

Ολοκληρωμένος

Monday, December 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: night,shadows
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem consisting of a hay(na) ku and a reverse hay(na) ku. Kind of melancholic...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 07 December 2020

The words, perfectly created and placed make us feel the shadows that for the poet have so much appeal, as well as the shadowy darkness of " starless night " . To be able to present and transmit a feeling, its atmosphere, so impeccably, illuminates only the very great.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 07 December 2020

Home is where the heart is, as the saying goes.

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