A Letter To A Man Poem by Jameaka Shibles

A Letter To A Man

Rating: 4.1


Like a rose wilting and dying,
So feels my heart.
You trampled the most fragile thing in my body,
And you didn’t even know it.
I thought you felt the same as me,
You smiled, touched my arm, stood up for me.
My spirits were lifted.
This was the first time anyone did this.
For a time, I felt beautiful,
Because you made me.
I never wanted to leave your side,
Afraid I would lose you.
But then the reality hit:
You never felt the same.
I had been floating on a fake cloud.
You trampled the most fragile thing in my body,
And you didn’t even know it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christopher Tiganescu 12 July 2010

very good, very deep, very sad, keep on writng

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Travis Johnson 07 July 2010

hey real deep stuff. cool how you talked about it

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Malaya Roses 04 July 2010

all times loves will win but it will hurts you so and if you are not strong enough, you will stumble in your life due to broken love not broken heart. very good work of words and i appreciate your self-realization at your age. Read mine Love Kills and you shall understand how love can make you be your own enemy. anyway, good poem.

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Joseph Poewhit 26 June 2010

The love game hurts--at times

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Undead Perez 26 June 2010

I have nothing to say really. I mean, it was so emotional and it's tough to describe what it makes you feel. I was really good though. It seemed so realistic and then, it's like it all just faded away so quickly as you realized what you felt was one sided.....

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Philip Jose 24 June 2011

this makes me cry, carry on writing

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Marcus Mckinley 30 July 2010

an unsung hero who stands up for you and yet he is a stranger you have not met. for the first time you feel special only to have him continue on with his day unaware. nicely written

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Unwritten Soul 15 July 2010

Dear friend it such a wonderful to hear u have a nice memories that will eternally to be remembered as u wrote this...but later it become darker and full of emotion there..so nicely expressed... But it is okay, as u told that like a 'rose wilting and dying' just let it go because one day the rose tree will produce more beautiful roses and attractive...when? just wait but must to remember that to have all the future roses buds to bloom again its need strong and healthy plant..so be strong n u will have ur beautiful future 'roses'..a dozen with nice smell..Good luck

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* Stephen *king 14 July 2010

As elephant tramples creeper you trampled my heart and gave me jitters...........good poem expressing the emotions from depth of heart.........

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Cody Williamson 12 July 2010

Wonderfully put emotion and depth! I relate far to much to poems like this lol Sorrowful and beauty in written word, thanks for sharing Jameaka! Keep it up :)

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