A Life Poem by Tapas Baidya

A Life

Rating: 5.0


Light!
You flash through the darkness
The black shadows rush at me
I fight and spark
To make me free

Darkness!
You protect very often
The laughing buds in the bush
Your silence makes me soft
All the stars smiling like frush

Oh!
I want light to find
My ways and means
In the innocent darkness
I am induced in dreams

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 13 August 2008

...a fine expression indeed.....10

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Seema Chowdhury 21 August 2008

A nice write. hope you will compose more and share with us.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 21 August 2008

You are genius in thought, no doubt. May I know more about you?

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Kesav Easwaran 21 August 2008

light and darkness...contradicting experiences of mind...good imagery here...and the mind ultimately inclining to realise the better course to pursue in life...a good write, Tapas…good style too… my ten for this...

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rohit sapra 25 August 2008

Darkness in life can lead towards lots as it depends on an individual how they interpret it. Ones with positive thoughts would try and convert darkness into ray of hope which will hold plenty dreams. This poem is nice liked reading it.

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Raj Arumugam 12 November 2008

easy-flowing, smooth writing.... Loved the poem.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 October 2008

O opurba hoyeche! Nicely composed in a beautiful form. Valobasha shoho my 10 with it.

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Tj Becker 22 September 2008

Your poem is really cool. I like the contradiction from light to dark. A great flow, just an enjoyable read.

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Ershad Mazumder 26 August 2008

Darkness is the womb of light. When you are in darkness the light of your soul blinks. You really feel that you are within you.Thanks tapas for sharing it.

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Rema Prasanna 26 August 2008

shades of life, light you flash thru darkness and darkness you flash thru light, impressive Tapas,10

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