Saturday, January 5, 2008

A Little Picture Comments

Rating: 3.2

A little picture, browned,
Had a tear on its edge
Where moth and rust
Plagued it away
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Annie Cordelia Adams
COMMENTS
Gajanan Mishra 17 October 2015

I feel happy, a perfect one, thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 October 2015

In honest respect. Nice work.

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Paul Reed 17 October 2015

Old pictures can entrance

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 October 2015

Beautiful poetry. Liked it.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 17 October 2015

congrats on having this poem selected as 'Poem of the day! ' It's a beautiful poem.

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Luis Gil 06 September 2008

The image held a message you needed to come across. A piece in the puzzle.

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Kaye Cee 06 August 2008

This is a fine poem. I loved your rhyme scheme. Although I can see why you need it, the word 'fledged' always has to do with birds and/or feathers. But my dictionary is old. Very good.

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Lourdes Schopenhauer 28 July 2008

Not only did I enjoy the imagery of this poem, but also the style and the words; who deserve being read out loud with slow pronunciation. The rhyme make the words as tasty and exciting as the journey you took us on.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 13 July 2008

Always we find old is gold. Such old photos bring to our memory the thoughts afresh of those good old days. A poem well composed.

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Bonnie Collins 28 May 2008

Filled with so much imagery that it actually brings the reader into someones attic with a haze between the cobwebs, and sun trying to shine in a dirty window with an old picture that has captured your heart... Absoluty one of the best I have heard in some time, this trully moved me dear...... EXCELLENT! ! ! A 10! !

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 25 April 2008

Love it! Yes, I truly do, your little picture as your poem, too.

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