A great feeling is blankness;
It is for this we strive in its fullness,
Blankness is when we reach the pinnacle
Eyes so closed, everything blanked for seconds.
What is this feling, I am at a loss to know
For it lasts not long, too short, but we desire it to be slow.
You can name it easily, but can't enjoy eyes up blown;
Somehow, we close all shutters for seconds of glow.
Eyes go blind, ears but deaf, suuroundings sense lost,
When we reach the height in all silence that tallest post.
That is where I thank only one; none but God
For he granted us many ways to indulge in this
sojourn, so soft.
A nice poetic imagination, Narayanan. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
what a theme it is blankness describes! ! ! ! ! can't even think of anything such awesome
this is a gr88 poem..i like the poem for its simplicity and flow...superb...please read my new poems
Friend, how how wisely you gave shape to the blankness of mind by extending its horizon towards the Almighty God who inspired all of us to sail in this journey of life. Nice theme.
great one, written so elegantly! I try to find a reason for blankness. If somebody avoid us we hurts, if somebody care us, we felt very happy . If nobody care us or nobody avoid us then we felt blankness. Am i right? your work is really thought provoking! happy to read this! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I am so amazed and speachless, you converted your words in an exquisite and wise poem, a higher level of consciousness and understanding by God grace..Cristina Teodor