One more day gone, fast and quick
Living cost up a kite, not tick by tick.
Pocket so thin and list too thick,
Vultures all round, to hook and pocket prick.
A commner has only a day normal
Cannot dream of any abnormal
Easy prey to all practises mal
Just gasps at the gush in the nearby mall.
Pending bills at him stare;
All things his due are but stale.
Cope up how is his quest of mind
Soap operas, only solace, his, to put things behind.
Narayanan Ramakrishnan.
This is so very true! A very thought-provoking poem that brings out the plight of the common man in today's world.
the reality of so many written so smoothly....I loved your choice of words
'Harsh Realities of life is pictured as a painting'. I liked its rhythm and essence.
Life is increasingly becoming so for a commoner. Let us learn to live this life happily.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Truly said-A commoner has only a day normal.......i appreciate...great write Sir