A Message Presaged Poem by Indira Renganathan

A Message Presaged

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A clear blue sky above
Down the pre-summer breeze
Gently rippling through
The shady trees
Presaging something loving

That restless waiting man
Feels some good omen
Expecting his life's better-half

A favourable season's moment
Yet he's not in a good mood
Until his better-half
The metro water tanker
Arrives though late by a month

Wednesday, February 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 05 February 2020

Good drinking water has become a precious commodity in many cities in Tamil Nadu. You people get only one seasonal rain, the North east. Let it rain pretty good in your area this season cooling your mind, replenishing all your water conservation systems. Metro water tanker has become the part and parcel of city dweller's life these days. Humorous, brilliant dual use of the word better-half. Well written poem +

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 February 2020

You have beautifully captured a favorite seasons's moment and you have interestingly expressed your views in this lovely poem. Clear blue sky motivates mind. Restless waiting gives us nice feelings. Expecting better life we can enhance beauty of life. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely work...10

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