</>When you wake up at 6 O'clock Am, and take a look from your window
You see an amazing sight, a beautiful light makes the sky glows
You feel a power comes when you inhale the breeze of the dancing flowers
You hear the sound of the singing birds even if they are on a high tower.
you hear the angels whispering in your ears.
You begin to cry from touching the sky happiness.
Then you find a cute child wiping your tears.
you see a light of hope, with beuatiful colours, and cute faces.
The sun hiding behind the rainbow
The sky snowing violently like a blow
A moment just when I wake and feel it,
I wish I could back in time again to feel it.
i love the use of imagery, creating that image makes a moment just reading it.
You picturised a wonderful dawn. Pls read and comment on my new write, 'Dearly loved, do you hear me? ', Thanks, Sam
So happy that you see the gift of life in the songs of birds, the rainbow and many other wonders. Life should be enjoyed no matter what comes your way. You are a gifted young Poet. Continue to thrive in the wonderful world of poetry. Good.
Yes we have to grab these moments and really treasure them. And as you've pointed out, it's often the simplest things that touch us the most.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nothing like a sunrise to show God's painting abilities in nature