A Moment Can'T Be Forgotten Poem by Abdallah Gamal

A Moment Can'T Be Forgotten

Rating: 4.7


</>When you wake up at 6 O'clock Am, and take a look from your window
You see an amazing sight, a beautiful light makes the sky glows

You feel a power comes when you inhale the breeze of the dancing flowers
You hear the sound of the singing birds even if they are on a high tower.

you hear the angels whispering in your ears.
You begin to cry from touching the sky happiness.
Then you find a cute child wiping your tears.
you see a light of hope, with beuatiful colours, and cute faces.

The sun hiding behind the rainbow
The sky snowing violently like a blow

A moment just when I wake and feel it,
I wish I could back in time again to feel it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 21 May 2012

Nothing like a sunrise to show God's painting abilities in nature

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Ahmed Abomahfouz 09 January 2012

very far imagination.nice poem

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Ratnakar Mandlik 11 November 2011

Nice imaginations and nice write-up. Keep it up.

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Liliana Roman 08 November 2011

i love the use of imagery, creating that image makes a moment just reading it.

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Sam Varghis 16 September 2011

You picturised a wonderful dawn. Pls read and comment on my new write, 'Dearly loved, do you hear me? ', Thanks, Sam

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Keshav Charan 14 November 2017

Sunthla,Jodhpur

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Patricia Grantham 09 November 2013

So happy that you see the gift of life in the songs of birds, the rainbow and many other wonders. Life should be enjoyed no matter what comes your way. You are a gifted young Poet. Continue to thrive in the wonderful world of poetry. Good.

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Heather Wilkins 09 June 2013

nice imagery. Some moments can never forgotten. nice ink

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Amanda Yates 07 September 2012

Yes we have to grab these moments and really treasure them. And as you've pointed out, it's often the simplest things that touch us the most.

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Ashleigh Catherine 01 September 2012

NIce, beautiful imagry!

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