Thursday, October 1, 2009

A Monk Comments

Rating: 5.0

Travels long unto dust with pouch
Who shall then for the bread dried
Let the break in spirit be the desire
Inner self in enlightenment on the doors
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Sadiqullah Khan
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rago rago 08 October 2009

a monk.........and he is the temple and the purest...............nice and expressed in a pure way...............

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Kesav Easwaran 02 October 2009

an in-depth poem...as always from you Sadiq...thanks...10

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Catrina Heart 02 October 2009

purely metaphorical, profound theme................Loved it dear friend! ! !

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Ejaz Khan 01 October 2009

Very deep write, beautifully expressed!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 01 October 2009

great signifiers! widely bloomed the signifieds! a blossom artfact! the last line is an oh! 10+

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Rani Turton 01 October 2009

Wonderful lines with the quest and a metaphysical theme.

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