A Morning-Walk (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

A Morning-Walk (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


early morning walk
greeting birds, trees, and flowers—
smiling at my thoughts

Saturday, October 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: walking,thoughts,morning,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 19 November 2015

Early Morning Journey Walks beauty in the dawn's light early after shadows echoes arches into first tread steps upon flesh fleet dawn paths... where rebirth fresh woken waits in greeting birds flowers trees singing into mellow mind songs smiling dawn sunbeam tipped thoughts... Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'A Morning Walk' by Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 18 November 2015

the beauty in the dawn's light, early after shadows echoes, arches into first steps tread, upon flesh dawn paths, where rebirth fresh waits, in greeting birds flowers trees, singing into mellow mind song, smiling in thoughts dawn sunbeam tipped... loved your early morning journey my friend :)

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M Asim Nehal 31 October 2015

A thoughtful day shared with nature....Lovely poem, they say that there is a echo and aura which birds and animals can easily pick from humans.....Your haiku deals with same spirituality.....Love it, Loved it and Loved it 10+++++++++++

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