A Natural Genius! Poem by Ramesh T A

A Natural Genius!

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Inspiration from Nature makes me free
And free flow of words become fine poem!
Peacock dances out of zeal seeing rain clouds;
Nightingale sings enjoying Nature in fulfilment!

Nature is friend, philosopher and guide for all!
This truth animal, men and natural beings know!
Eye, ear, nose, tongue and feeling if sensitive
Lessons of Nature open heart to do all in love!

Ape and men learn from others to do all ever
As where intellect is strong instinct is weak!
If instinct, intellect and intuition are high sure
One will be super being creative as God or poet!

Engrossed in Nature's influence all comes naturally
For the genius doing great feat as singer, poet and all!

Monday, December 19, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: animal,creative,inspiration,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luis Estable 19 December 2011

One thing that I like much of this try is the diction employed. I think that your choice of words is good here. The poem as a whole I believe succeeds, and several lines are quite poetic. I can see that you are not new at this, and have been writng like this for some time now. I like the poem so much that I read it three times. You have done very well with this piece. By the way, I have a book of poems out called, 'Sim ply My Mind. ' If you like a copy, go to Amamzon.com and type the name of the book or my name Luis Estable and you will see, and also, if you would be so kind to pass the word along. The best to you and never stop penning your good poems. Luis

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Dave Walker 19 December 2011

Really great poem, really enjoyed reading it. A great poem.

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Ramesh T A

Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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